There once was this magical forest called Edden but no one ever knew about it because an old lady named Sarah kept it a secret for so long. She once told her grandchild Lucy when she was just a little girl.
After twenty years time Lucy went looking for the magical forest. She went from country to country, city to city, forest to forest and desert to desert but she still couldn't find it so she gave up.
Then she got a phone call by some random person. He said he was her brother she didn't want to believe him because she never grew up with a brother or a dad. She never met him in her life.
“Then he said that his name was Josh and that he lived with his dad”. She told him that she never knew that she had a dad and a brother. Then he said that he found the magical forest and that his dad gave him a map to go there before he died.
1 comments:
Hi Dallas, I like the way this story ends with a cliff hanger, it makes me want to know what will happen next! It would be great to read a description of the characters or forest in this story so that the reader could picture it in their mind. I wonder if the main character will find the forest and if it is really her brother.
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